Jessica Friday's Page

"Interesting video, Connor!  A very creative approach to the issue."

"Wow!  Great work, Matt!  Your video was both informative and interesting!"

"Interesting use of text to tell your story, Sebastian.  I think a few more visuals and some variation in the music may have been helpful.  However, you explained how virtual communication can be used to spread information."

"Great work, Kelsy!  A very powerful message.  I'm very impressed that you obtained permission from Invisible Children."

"A very powerful story, Chris.  It was hard to hear the outsource clip, but otherwise you did a good job.  You addressed the important issues of education, gender equity, and human rights.  "

"Excellent!  Diana, you created a very professional looking video that succinctly delivers your message."

"Veronica, you did a great job delivering your message!  Although you should have identified the images in your credits, you neatly wove together images and text to tell your story."

"Good job, Megan!  I know you had quite a difficult time getting the video on the Ning but I'm so glad you persevered and submitted your video.  You concisely addressed the background, uses, and significance of Google."

"Isabel, a very well-thought out story.  Often, outsourcing is portrayed as a negative but you skillfully showed that outsourcing can be a positive force."

"A very strong introduction, Jeff.  You demonstrated how the web is used to bring people, organizations, and ideas together."

"Jake, a very comprehensive video.  You've succinctly described the ways in which the Internet helps in various aspects of life. Although a few more visuals might have been helpful, you've done a great job."

"Good work, Brandon.  You showed how the Internet helps students to learn and retain information."

"Great job, Emmett!  You showed how the Internet can change people's lives."

"A very moving story, Matt.  Excellent pacing of the text and a good choice of music.  It might have been useful to include more images and/or information about responses to the blog from others.  "

"Very well done, Whitney!  You successfully used images, text, and music to convey a very important message.  I particularly appreciated that you really reached out to your viewer with the use of "us."  "