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Replied Dec. 2, 2008

Replied Dec. 2, 2008

Hometown:

Melbourne, Australia

Your school and country

Presbyterian Ladies' College, Melbourne, Australia

Your Role in Flat Classroom

student

About Me:

I'm 16 yr old Aussie Christian :)

At 9:49am on December 9, 2008, Lauren said…: Hi Sue. Thanks for your comment. I thought the exact same thing about no end message or meat when I watched it on ning later. However due to time constraints, our class had to publish it asap due to exams and marking it, so I simply published what I had done. I hope you have a great week :)
Lauren

At 5:24am on December 8, 2008, Sue Hellman said…: Hi Lauren -- I can't leave a comment on your video page as something is not working and the comment space does not show up on my machine. I really like the premise of your piece and its humor. I think you've done a great job of developing a story and letting us discover your message as we watch. It's intriguing and piques the viewer's curiosity. The footage is crisp and the transitions are strong. However, I think you leave a little too much unsaid. The meat is in the caption beneath the video. Perhaps you could have reflected more of that in the piece itself. --SueH

At 8:31am on October 21, 2008, Flick said…: hello again..
how are ya??
I am so into this project...are you?
I hope you have an awesome week..
we have this friday off as we have the warrnambool show....,..YIPEE,,,,,lol

ttyl

X.x.X
FLick

At 4:21am on October 21, 2008, Flick said…: yeah u too.
hope you do well in ya exams..........
so what year level are ya in ???
FLick..........♥

At 2:29am on October 20, 2008, Sreya said…: hey...just letting you all know that neela's getting a new account cause something's wrong with her old one...

At 7:11am on October 16, 2008, Spencer B said…: hey thar!
im in your group thing...your in 10c rite?
well, you seem pretty awesome so far

how b u?

At 6:52pm on October 15, 2008, kayla said…: Hey there, i noticed you edited the wiki and added something under current news, yet i think you need to include a summary of what it's about not just the link and a sentence if it's going to be posted otherwise it seems useless to include in on the wiki. :)