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Michael commented on Andrew W TAS's blog post The 23 Minute Super Short Poem"I like this poem ALOT. The rhyme and repetition is been used well.
Reading this poem made me feel a little cold, but also made me felt mysterious. "
Michael commented on Nicole C_TAS's blog post Losing"I like how you said "hear my lovely family", and you started listing out what and who your family is."
Michael commented on Vincent KTAS's blog post Snow white winter"I like how your first part rhymes.
Amazing description of the snow.
NICE ,VERY NICE ,STICKY RICE"
Vincent KTAS commented on Michael's blog post Lake Side Poetry Assignment"Each of your lines aren't too long, the whole painting slowly builds up while we read through every detail of your poem."
Quinten S_ISD commented on Michael's blog post Lake Side Poetry Assignment"Great poem, but i think the line
"As if recovering from a storm that just passed"
does not really fit in well and changes the mood and atmosphere of the poem."
Laura C_TAS commented on Michael's blog post Lake Side Poetry Assignment"I really like your poem, I think I could have imagined a similar picture even if you didn't have the photo on there. I don't think you need so many 'likes.' You can make some of your similes and comparisons into metaphors, it…"
Michael posted a blog postLake Side Poetry Assignment
Staring at the pictureDon’t know if it’s sunrise or sunsetEach tells a different story Looking from the leftThe sky so gloomy,Likes it’ll rain anytime The calm surface of the lakeQuiet and chillAs if recovering from a storm that just passed The sun gracefully rising from the forestShining through the clouds, the light…See More
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Lake Side Poetry Assignment
Posted on February 17, 2011 at 2:16pm 4 Comments 0 Likes
Staring at the picture
Don’t know if it’s sunrise or sunset
Each tells a different story
Looking from the left
The sky so gloomy,
Likes it’ll rain anytime
The calm surface of the lake
Quiet and chill
As if recovering from a…
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